P4
FEEDBACK
From my presentation and treatment the feedback which I got was to make adjustments to my documents from P2 and P3 of the unit. I need to also add in about how the rules affect my campaign as in for example could the advert only be shown after 9pm due to violence in the advert? The company wouldn't want to be responsible for influencing children to be violent. Also, When we took the first shoot of the advert some of the shots weren't in focus and overall weren't as good as they could've been, the angle was also portrait so we got told to edit the clips to make them look landscape. Instead of this we decided to re film it completely as we felt that we could do a better job with the help of the feedback. The last bit of feedback which we got was to make the audio of the voice over louder so that the audience can hear it clearly.